the heart understands all the inner parts of your soul... listen.
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Monday, February 11, 2013
let go and love ...
in my open love
you bathe thirsty need
bottled up, after one incident of shame,
that flowered in your mind
like rarecoral buried in the mouth of the sea~
lay down with me in silence
and allow my mystery to absorb your pain.
I like this one, Paige. You are a gentle spirit and it shows through the kindness in your poetry. You speak to the reader and to the person in your poem. Lovely as always.
This brings a flutter to my heart and a tear to my eye. It's strange how the very things that haunt and hurt us are also what makes us who we are -- part of what makes us beautiful, enticing, mysterious...
Paige, very pretty write.
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Very beautiful, and deeply inviting...
ReplyDeleteYes, mystery is most enticing.
ReplyDeleteI like this one, Paige. You are a gentle spirit and it shows through the kindness in your poetry. You speak to the reader and to the person in your poem. Lovely as always.
ReplyDeleteThis brings a flutter to my heart and a tear to my eye. It's strange how the very things that haunt and hurt us are also what makes us who we are -- part of what makes us beautiful, enticing, mysterious...
ReplyDeletehi pamela - thank you!
ReplyDeletelord bard: so lovely to hear from you.
ReplyDeletethank you.
thank you, old egg!
ReplyDeletedear rebeka: you are so kind to me. thank you for your sweet words and for the visit.
ReplyDeletecammila - you are so right. the hurting part of us often shapes into a thing of beauty. thank you for stopping by.
ReplyDeleteYou create beauty with words ... I love your poems :-)
ReplyDeleteWow, so very pretty and gently inviting!
ReplyDeletexoxoxo ♡
greenbabe: thank you so much for the sweet compliment!
ReplyDeletedear dianne: hello there and thank you.
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